I suggest downloading.
I WOULD LIKE SOME FEEDBACK ON THIS ONE PLZ.
I'm not a subscriber so i can't request critique. So you like/dislike the tone? Linework too thin? That sorta thing. It won't get better if you don't tell me what I'm doing wrong.
Well, here's chapter one, in all it's shanty glory.
NOTE: Some Moire because of resizing to fit the flash file. Also, I think all the pages work in the right order, but you never know...
Its an annoying compromise between ability and time. There's no point doing it totally badass and taking years on it, because I wont be able to produce it for fixed deadlines if I was ever published. And so I had to cut back on quality, but it means I could in theory produce 1 or 2 pages a day at this standard. Each page takes about 4 - 6 hours. It's currently lacking a little action but MEH. *dons shades*
I'll still be sending this off to publishers soon, but I've not got any high hopes for it. But it's worth a shot. If they say no, you try again later.
All these characters and things are mine, plz do not steals or I will inevitably cry.